(Note: To peek at my personal bookshelf, page down and click on the NEXT button. There you'll find many books that have helped me improve my writing.)


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These days book and magazine editors expect a manuscript to be ready for publication when they receive it. If it is incorrectly formatted, poorly written or is full of typing errors and misspellings, it will be unread and promptly returned. Also, most writers are so close to their work that they fail to see problems in it, such as: imprecise language, overuse of adverbs or passive voice, weak sentence structure, or "telling" instead of "showing".

Thousands of articles, book proposals, business proposals, and written applications never make it past a reviewer's first glance. A high percentage of university papers at any academic level get lower than average grades because they were difficult to read or understand. Distracting errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation can destroy a work -- even if the content is great!

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NOW, TO THE BOOKSHELF!

I hope you'll benefit from some of the books that have helped me through various stages of my writing career. All the books I've listed are ones that I have myself, books that I believe will be helpful to you as well. If I add something to my personal library that I think you would find useful I'll also add it here. Some of the books I've chosen to include are simply great for quick reference while some are absolutely gotta haves. Some keep me on the right track when I stray beyond earthly boundaries and some are dog-eared from reading again and again because they feed the fire that makes me believe that I can write that story! And you know what? If I can do it, so can you!

Techniques Of The Selling Writer
By Dwight Swain
Techniques Of The Selling Writer is a writer's bible. In my opinion Dwight Swain is the finest teacher ever to write on the techniques of writing commercial fiction. I can't say enough about this book, just that everything you ever needed to know about writing, Dwight Swain knew, and much of it can be found in this book.

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On Writing
By Stephen King
Compelling, entertaining, and informative! Put this book at the top of your list. It’s a must have for any writer and one of the best works on the writing life I’ve seen. On Writing is practically three books under one cover and without King’s near fatal accident in June 1999 we wouldn’t have the privilege of reading it. The first half of On Writing sat abandoned on a shelf until after his accident. He finished it as therapy.

The first part is an autobiography, in which King talks about his life before he became a successful writer, his problems with alcohol and drugs, and the great debt he owes to his wife and fellow novelist, Tabitha. It's a brutally honest look at his joys, and sorrows and his former addictions.

The second part of the book is filled with advice for writers, be they novice or professional. King charms, infuriates and challenges and his advice may sometimes go against what we learned in Fiction 101. But when he talks about inspiration and magic and even tells the brutal truth about bad writers, we know instinctively that he’s right.

Finally, King talks about the life-changing accident, and how in spite of everything, he managed to make it back.

King gives invaluable insight for any writer dreaming of becoming published and fans the sparks for those of us that have been at it for a while. Be sure you buy the hardback because this is one book you’re going to be reading again and again.

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Starting From Scratch: A Different Kind of Writer's Manual
By Rita Mae Brown (Bantam)
From the best-selling author of Rubyfruit Jungle and Bingo, here is a writer's manual as provocative, frank, and funny as her fiction. Unlike most writers' guides, this one had as much to do with how writers live as with mastering the tools of their trade. Rita Mae Brown begins with a very personal account of her own career, from her days as a young poet who had written a novel no publisher wanted to take a chance on, right up to her recent adventures as a Hollywood screenwriter.

In a sassy style that makes her outspoken advice as entertaining as it is useful, she provides straight talk about paying the rent while maintaining the energy to write; and dealing with agents, publishers, critics, and the publicity circus; about pursuing journalism, academia, or screen-writing; and about rejecting the Hemingway myth of the hard-living, hard-drinking genius. In addition Brown, a former teacher or writing, offers a serious examination of the writer's tool-language, plotting, characters, symbolism, plus exercises to sharpen the ear for dialogue, and a fascinating, annotated reading list of important works from the seventh century to the late twentieth.

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The No Experience Necessary Writer's Course
By Scott Edelstein (Scarborough House)
A unique stress-free approach for anyone who has ever wanted to write. For anyone who has ever wanted to begin writing, or for practiced writers who want to improve their technique, this book offers a step-by-step, stress-free program to loosen and develop the creative urge.

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Writing Down the Bones: Freeing the Writer Within
By Natalie Goldberg (Shambhala)
The secret of creativity, Natalie Goldberg makes clear, is to subtract rules for writing, not add them. Proof that she knows what she is talking about is abundant in the speed, grace, accuracy, and simplicity of her own sentences. Writing Down the Bones is "simply the best aid and comfort around today."--Judith Guest, author of Ordinary People.

Before her book Writing Down the Bones was published in 1986, Natalie Goldberg was an unknown student of Buddhism with a passion for writing. Today, with millions of copies of Writing Down the Bones in print, Natalie Goldberg has helped change the way writing is practiced in homes, schools, and workshops across America.

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Wild Mind: Living The Writer's Life
By Natale Goldberg (Bantam)
Natalie Goldberg, author of the best-selling Writing Down The Bones, teaches a method of writing that can take you beyond craft to the true source of creative power: The mind that is "raw, full of energy, alive and hungry.

Here is compassionate, practical, and often humorous advice about how to find time to write, how to discover your personal style, how to make sentences come alive, and how to overcome procrastination and writer's block. Including more than thirty provocative "Try this" exercises to get your pen moving.

And here also is a larger vision of the writer's task: balancing daily responsibilities with a commitment to writing; knowing when to take risks as a writer and a human being; coming to terms with success and failure and loss; and learning self-acceptance-both in life and art. Wild Mind will change your way of writing. It may also change your life.

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What Happened When: A Chronology of Life and Events in America
By Gorton Garruth (Signet)
An essential collection of facts and dates from 986-today. Need to know what happened in 1785,1836 or 1944? Each year is divided into segments covering; Civil rights, exploration and settlement, government, statistics, wars, architecture, arts and music, entertainment, publishing, theater, business and industry, education, philosophy and religion, science, fashion, folkways, holidays, social issues, crime and sports. This is an indispensable, instant access sourcebook complete with an extensive date and topic index.

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Writer's Encyclopedia
By Amanda Boyd (Editor)
The Writer's Encyclopedia is a versatile writer's reference detailing more than 1,300 items in a broad range of relevant topics. It delves into various contests and awards, organizations and associations, writing techniques and editorial jargon, explains all manner of publishing practices, and explores a number of writer and editor related ethical issues. The Encyclopedia provides the purpose, scope and address of the Editorial Freelancers Association, describes standard editorial rewriting practices, and summarizes the debate over the value of journalism degrees as opposed to a liberal-arts education. There are items on first-draft revisions, first-person short stories, and first serial rights, discussions of gossip columns, gospel music, and go-aheads, plus charts of Library of Congress systems, magazine-organization systems, and a table of magazine revenues compared to costs and profits. For freelancers, especially, who haven't a ready cohort or office colleague to offer clear explanations, savvy experience, and rational perspective, the Writer's Encyclopedia is a useful and reliable professional resource. --Stephanie Gold

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Writer's Market 2011: 8,000 Editors Who Buy What You Write
By Katie Struckel Brogan (Editor), Robert Brewer, Writer's Digest Books
Given the unbelievable variety and sheer number of publishers listed here--1,170 book publishers, 1,534 consumer magazines, 464 trade magazines, 250 script buyers, plus book producers, syndicates, and greeting-card publishers--it's almost hard to imagine a writer not finding a publisher. New this year are large icons indicating new listings, a limited section on literary agents, and a chart showing the owners and imprints of the major book publishers. In addition to the standard articles about query letters, book proposals, and freelance rates are profiles of authors, including nature writer and prisoner Ken Lamberton, Sebastian Junger (The Perfect Storm), and Anna Quindlen (Black and Blue), who says that "Writing is like anything else. You fall, you pick yourself up, and you try again. When you're discouraged, you eat ice cream."--Jane Steinberg

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Guide to Literary Agents, 2011: 500 Agents Who Sell What You Write
By Rachel Vater
Get connected to the agents that can make your writing career happen. 2003 Guide to Literary Agents puts it all at your fingertips, featuring complete and accurate contact information on more than 500 free and fee-charging literary and script agents.

Using easy-to-reference indexes and icons, you'll quickly locate the best agents to represent your work among listings that provide all the critical details you need. Along with who to send what and where, you'll also get key advice on how to send your work, including: tips for locating the right agent, guidance on understanding and negotiating fees and contracts, do's and don'ts for contacting an agent, and much more.

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Formatting & Submitting Your Manuscript
By Jack Neff, Don Prues, Glenda Tennant Neff (Writer's Digest Books)
Send your letters and proposals like a pro and increase your chances of getting published. Formatting & Submitting Your Manuscript makes it easy by featuring full-size examples of how to present virtually any type of manuscript.

Covering every part of the manuscript submission package, this guide shows you the dos and dont's for creating persuasive but professional correspondence and submission materials, including: query letters, title pages, cover letters, tables of contents, outlines, author biographies, cover pages, endorsements pages, synopses and reply postcards.

There are also examples you can follow for submitting by fax or online, in addition to tips from respected agents and editors who help you avoid the mistakes that shout "amateur!" Spend more time writing and less time worrying about your manuscript presentations. With this guide, you'll gain the confidence you need to format and submit your manuscript quickly and effectively.

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How to Get Happily Published (5th Ed)
By Judith Appelbaum (Harper Collins)
According to Judith Appelbaum, author of How to Get Happily Published, "it is largely within your power to determine whether your work will get published and whether the public will buy it once it's released." Anyone who has had a manuscript boomerang back from every publisher who sees it (or a book remaindered mere months after publication) may view this assertion with some amount of skepticism. But, as Appelbaum says, "hardly anybody treats getting published as if it were a rational, manageable activity," and it's hard to argue with that.

In addition to providing a mini-course on editors and agents and submissions and funding--peppered with revealing anecdotes from the front lines--Appelbaum offers information less frequently found in books of this sort. For one, she emphasizes the importance of taking publicity for your book or article into your own hands (and she has savvy advice on how to do so without alienating your publisher's publicity department).

She also makes a very strong case for self- publishing, not to be confused with using a vanity press and then tells you how to go about it. And finally, her annotated resource guide to books, Web sites, periodicals, courses, organizations, and more--stretching to over 120 pages--is astounding. That's right. Astounding. --Jane Steinberg

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Write the Perfect Book Proposal : 10 Proposals That Sold and Why
By Jeff Herman, Deborah M. Adams (John Wiley & Sons)
A successful agent shows writers how to put together a winning proposal. In a market where many proposals never even get read and only the best are sold, this authoritative guide gives both experienced and aspiring writers candid, clear-cut advice on what works. Writers are taken step-by-step through 10 diverse proposals that were bought by publishers and are shown why they worked. Also includes information on cover and query letters.

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The Princeton Review Word Smart and Grammar Smart
By Living Language (Editor) audio program on CD
The best-selling Word Smart and Grammar Smart audio programs are now available on compact disc. The words you use say a lot about you. Some words say that you're smart, persuasive, and informed. Others say that you don't know what you're talking about. Knowing which words to use, though, is only half the battle: Once you've found le mot juste, you have to know how to use it correctly. Expanding your vocabulary and learning basic grammar rules are two guaranteed ways to improve your speaking, reading, and writing skills. Not only are these skills critical on standardized tests such as the SAT or GRE, they will also open doors for you professionally and even socially.

The Princeton Review is recognized as the nation's leader in test preparation and vocabulary- building courses. This audio program is based on the best-selling books Word Smart and Grammar Smart by The Princeton Review.

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The Elements of Style
By William Strunk Jr. (Allyn & Bacon)
Many books about writing are huge, but "The Elements of Style," the best of them, is extremely short: 92 pages, including index. Read them all. Briefly and vigorously, Strunk and White will tell you, for example, when to use (and not to use) commas, which words to avoid, how to divide paragraphs, and generally how to pare your writing down to essentials. Many professional writers advise reading Strunk and White cover-to-cover once a year whether you need to or not.

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Self-Editing for Fiction Writers
By Renni Browne, Dave King
Teaches writers how to do for themselves what publishing editors used to do for their authors. The term "editor" has taken on a new connotation in recent years. At today's publishing houses, editors find most of their time is invested in negotiating contracts, acquiring books, and lunching literary agents. Because this leaves so little time for working on manuscripts, even very strong submissions that need editing tend to be rejected. Writers who use this book can give their work the editorial attention it needs, before the book ever reaches the publisher's desk. A pre-edited book, short story, or article makes your work look more like that of a professional rather than an amateur. As such, its author is far more likely to get published and to become a better writer in the process.

Both novice and seasoned fiction writers can ensure themselves greater publishing success by correcting problems before submitting their manuscripts to an editor. This exemplary instruction manual offers readers wisdom of two experienced editors who focus on writing/editing techniques (the mechanics of dialogue, characterization, point of view, etc.). Adhering to fictions' underlying principle of "show and tell," this lively text includes both good and bad examples in each lesson. At the end of every chapter is a tip checklist to match against one's own work and two or three exercises with which to practice and reinforce the chapter's topic.

Renni Browne and Dave King, two of the country's best-known independent editors, have edited hundreds of books by new authors who became published authors. In this book, highly praised by writers of biography, history, and memoirs, as well as fiction, they teach writers the techniques they've developed over the years. Applying them can enable writers to get their manuscript into the kind of shape that makes literary agents want to represent it and publishers want to publish it.

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